Now, where did I leave that?

Monday, February 21, 2011

Microfiction Monday #71









Light echoed through Let’s Make a Deal empty doorways. 
Souls flowed towards heaven’s radiant doors with
one united prayer-- “please open”.


Stony River: A Writing Life hosts Microfiction Monday, wherein one writes a piece of fiction of 140 characters or less, inspired by her picture of the week.


10 comments:

Vicki said...

Seems this hallway is bringing out the darker side of life to most.
Good take on the photo!

Akelamalu said...

Great take on the prompt photo. :)

Peggy said...

Clever tie in to Let's Make A Deal.
Enjoyed reading this!

Sylvia K said...

Different take on the pic of the day and a good one! I, too, like the tie in to Let's Make a Deal! Hope your week goes well!

Sylvia

Pat said...

Beautiful metaphor--I love it!

Susan Fobes said...

Wow-this one was so visual... Very creative this week!

Michael G-G said...

Very impressive MF.

Thanks for the comment on mine. Hope your week is going well.

Madeleine said...

It's such an eerie scene isn't it?
Great micro :O)

sylviamorice said...

Love "with one united prayer". Very powerful. Loved your MM. Cheers~

Karen said...

Creative microfiction! :>